I love the sped up parts in addition to the raw camera movement. I made the scenes feel more lively and you could feel the main protagonists feelings and frustration.
That had to have taken so much thought to get the sequence to make sense, so good job! I could easily tell what was a flashback and what wasn't. And you did a good job of sticking to your idea from the pitch.
I liked the flow of your video and how fast paced it was. You did a great job at telling the story to the viewer. There were a few different shots that I felt were somewhat out of place and left me confused as to what message they were trying to relay.
I really love the different shots you took and the different places you shot your footage. It all flows together very well, and fits the song. Your video turned out very nice, well done:)
I really liked the blue hue you added to the memory sequences. It made them more believable as memories and also had a great ascetic. Next time just try to watch your cameras focus and use a tripod as much as possible.
Very nice variety of locations and shots. I really think the scenes that took place within the city fit really well with the song. I understood what was going on in the video, at the beginning it was a little bit confusing but as it went on I understood it much better. Overall nicely done.
I really liked your concept, and I liked that you muted out the colors in the flashback shots to make them look different. I would have really liked to see the phone at the end when he was texting a little more clearly, it seemed blurry.
Great video. The camera shots were done very well and the song was a great choice, but I think the story got kind of lost. For me it was a little hard to follow.
Great shots in this video and the acting was great as well! It was really easy to understand the story. The one gripe I had was that a couple of your shots were very out of focus. That pulled me from the video whenever I saw it. Other than that, though, everything else was done very well.
Your video really stayed true to your pitch! I think you did a really great job of building up the personalities and relationships of the characters!
I also think you used the shaky scenes really well! You also used a tripod for a lot of it so the variety was great!
As a suggestion, I would be careful about the scaling of the videos! A lot of your shots were different sizes on screen which made the shots jump around a lot. Also I would have liked the lighting to be brighter / more consistent.
But I loved the end scene! It really did feel like you described! The ultimate moment of whether or not he'd pick up the phone. Great work!
I really enjoyed some of the shots used however I think the guy in the plaid shirt wasn't really needed, maybe I missed why he was in there but I just didn't get a real sense as to the reason. I really liked the shot of Jonah throwing the bottle at the word love, that was probably my favorite shot out of everything, and the end was handled well, I just would've liked to see more of them fighting over text or something and things not going right before the call.
I really enjoyed some of the shots used however I think the guy in the plaid shirt wasn't really needed, maybe I missed why he was in there but I just didn't get a real sense as to the reason. I really liked the shot of Jonah throwing the bottle at the word love, that was probably my favorite shot out of everything, and the end was handled well, I just would've liked to see more of them fighting over text or something and things not going right before the call.
This video is done very well! You have a variety of shoots! I really like that one that is shoot from across the street when he enters the apartment. However, the story line is a little hard to follow. Are the scenes with the guy and his girlfriend flashbacks? But other than that aspect i think you did a great job filming this piece! Well done!
I think you guys did a great job of following the storyline from your pitch. I thought there were some really cool camera angles that you utilized for your shots.
I loved the pace of this video, the fast speed compared to the moderate speed. I also liked the concept of the video and the different locations shot. Also camera shots were nice too.
Eric & Jonah you guys rocked it out, I told you :)
ReplyDeleteI love the sped up parts in addition to the raw camera movement. I made the scenes feel more lively and you could feel the main protagonists feelings and frustration.
ReplyDeleteThe story was easy to follow and the acting was good. the shots tended to have a little bit of shake and were also a little out of focus.
ReplyDeleteThat had to have taken so much thought to get the sequence to make sense, so good job! I could easily tell what was a flashback and what wasn't. And you did a good job of sticking to your idea from the pitch.
ReplyDeleteI liked the flow of your video and how fast paced it was. You did a great job at telling the story to the viewer. There were a few different shots that I felt were somewhat out of place and left me confused as to what message they were trying to relay.
ReplyDeleteI really love the different shots you took and the different places you shot your footage. It all flows together very well, and fits the song. Your video turned out very nice, well done:)
ReplyDeleteI really liked the blue hue you added to the memory sequences. It made them more believable as memories and also had a great ascetic. Next time just try to watch your cameras focus and use a tripod as much as possible.
ReplyDeleteVery nice variety of locations and shots. I really think the scenes that took place within the city fit really well with the song. I understood what was going on in the video, at the beginning it was a little bit confusing but as it went on I understood it much better. Overall nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your concept, and I liked that you muted out the colors in the flashback shots to make them look different. I would have really liked to see the phone at the end when he was texting a little more clearly, it seemed blurry.
ReplyDeleteGreat video. The camera shots were done very well and the song was a great choice, but I think the story got kind of lost. For me it was a little hard to follow.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the song and many of the shots that were used
ReplyDeleteGreat shots in this video and the acting was great as well! It was really easy to understand the story. The one gripe I had was that a couple of your shots were very out of focus. That pulled me from the video whenever I saw it. Other than that, though, everything else was done very well.
ReplyDeleteYour video really stayed true to your pitch! I think you did a really great job of building up the personalities and relationships of the characters!
ReplyDeleteI also think you used the shaky scenes really well! You also used a tripod for a lot of it so the variety was great!
As a suggestion, I would be careful about the scaling of the videos! A lot of your shots were different sizes on screen which made the shots jump around a lot.
Also I would have liked the lighting to be brighter / more consistent.
But I loved the end scene! It really did feel like you described! The ultimate moment of whether or not he'd pick up the phone. Great work!
I really enjoyed some of the shots used however I think the guy in the plaid shirt wasn't really needed, maybe I missed why he was in there but I just didn't get a real sense as to the reason. I really liked the shot of Jonah throwing the bottle at the word love, that was probably my favorite shot out of everything, and the end was handled well, I just would've liked to see more of them fighting over text or something and things not going right before the call.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed some of the shots used however I think the guy in the plaid shirt wasn't really needed, maybe I missed why he was in there but I just didn't get a real sense as to the reason. I really liked the shot of Jonah throwing the bottle at the word love, that was probably my favorite shot out of everything, and the end was handled well, I just would've liked to see more of them fighting over text or something and things not going right before the call.
ReplyDeleteThis video is done very well! You have a variety of shoots! I really like that one that is shoot from across the street when he enters the apartment. However, the story line is a little hard to follow. Are the scenes with the guy and his girlfriend flashbacks? But other than that aspect i think you did a great job filming this piece! Well done!
ReplyDeleteI think you guys did a great job of following the storyline from your pitch. I thought there were some really cool camera angles that you utilized for your shots.
ReplyDeleteI loved the pace of this video, the fast speed compared to the moderate speed. I also liked the concept of the video and the different locations shot. Also camera shots were nice too.
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